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How to Critique Your Own Yellow Page Ad
Dr. Lynella Grant
Forget what you know about your business.
Your goal is to see your Yellow Page display advertisement
the way a directory user sees it. You can’t act like
you know anything about your enterprise that isn’t there,
on the page. Look at your ad without pride or being identified
with your operation. If you pretend it’s someone else’s,
you can spot the flaws you’d otherwise overlook.
Mentally put the competition’s name
on your ad. Does what you say apply equally well to them?
If it does, you haven’t effectively set yourself apart.
When all the ads seem alike buyers think they can get the
same thing from any of them (and are more likely to select
by price). The goal isn’t just to look different, but
to actually be different in ways customers notice and care
about.
Does the ad provide the facts readers and
callers need? Directory users have already decided to buy
something. So they’re looking in the Yellow Pages to
find who provides it. This is the educational phase of the
buying process. As soon as a person finds enough information
to take the next step, they close the directory and move on.
Customers want information. They’re
looking for some reason to prefer some business over the rest.
Well-thought-through ads make their job much easier. So give
readers the precise information they’re looking for.
It’s hard to do that unless you understand your customers’
mindset and priorities. It helps to be absolutely clear about
how you’re different from other businesses in the heading.
Look at the ad as a whole Now squint your
eyes so you can’t make out the words. This lets you
get the overall impression. Most ads just get scanned, so
the words themselves are only read if there’s a double-take
that captures the reader’s attention.
Is the whole image pleasant to look at?
Does it reveal an attractive, unique personality of the business?
Is there a business-like, competent tone? Do all the parts,
from the fonts and images, to messages, all mesh and express
the same distinctive flavor?
Are there distractions from the image or
message? Does every element carry its weight and support the
whole mood? Fat borders and cutesy graphics use valuable space,
without much pay-off. If there’s color, is it used effectively?
Does it contribute or distract?
Notice the business name. Does it tell you
what the enterprise actually does (aside from the category
it’s in)? Generic names like R&J Enterprises don’t
cut it. If the name isn’t informative, you might need
a slogan or tagline - but do make it unique to you.
Is the information arranged to be easy to
read? Every ad is a compromise between saying enough and arranging
it to clearly communicate an attractive impression. Does the
most important information stand out? Is it easy to find (without
being too packed in)? What catches the eye first? Second?
Third?
How complete is the information? Does it
provide what callers are most likely to ask about? Customers
are concerned about convenience. Does the ad include crucial
location, hours, extra services, parking, payment options,
after-hours contact, etc.? Is there a way for them to get
extra information (like a booklet or from a Web site)? Give
bonus points for that.
Look word for word. Is every one essential?
Is anything important left out? Is it organized with bullets
or clusters so related information hangs together?
Next, consider the ads around it A Yellow
Page ad never appears in isolation. And what goes on with
the nearby ads influences the way people respond to yours
- more than the specifics of your ad. What else is on the
page, and the pages before and after yours? Be honest now,
do they do a better job of grabbing the eye? Is the whole
page a blur - without a clear attention grabber? And if there
is one, what makes it stand out better than yours? How can
you improve on it?
Assessing your ad is the first step to making
a better one The real value of critiquing your Yellow Page
ad is to sharpen your own eye to pick up the crucial differences
among competing ads. Practice in other categories where you
don’t have a stake. Soon you can tell in a glance which
ads have more appeal - and why.
Find free expert assistance in developing
a first-rate Yellow Page ad at http://www.yellowpagesage.com.
Or arrange for a professional critique of your ad, so you
don’t miss a trick. Either way, you’ll find ample
ways to improve your ad that will improve its performance.
And you will be ready when the next directory comes around.
©2004, Lynella Grant
Dr. Lynella Grant, an expert in visual communication.
How printed materials send signals that strengthen or undo
the words. Author, The Business Card Book & Yellow Page
Smarts http://www.yellowpagesage.com
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